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Post by Burst Power Draco Thu Feb 11, 2010 6:32 am

Discus my story here
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Post by Icey Thu Feb 11, 2010 6:40 am

Okay I have some advice for the story, Try being more descriptive, just saying,"a young man who nobody knew" doesnt tell the reader much, go more indept to make the reader really want to know more about the man and the mysteries that are going on. I promise for the story though. The chapter could be longer and it could move slower. Dragg some parts out a little lol, dont rush through the thing, take your time with events in the story so we as readers of it can enjoy it more. Okay :D
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Post by Burst Power Draco Sat Feb 13, 2010 7:46 pm

ok thanks icey
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Post by Icey Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:23 pm

no problem, Im glad to help :D
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