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Post by Cial Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:09 am

Hew we go! New discussion on My new scripts!


Last edited by Cial on Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:53 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Post by Charon Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:36 am

Wow, this sounds extremely intense! Do you need any input from your fellow clanmates? I'm sure we'd all love to help. ^^
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Post by Cial Wed Sep 09, 2009 5:44 am

Well, I guess a few storyline potholes would be filled if you guys could discuss them, but NO CHARACTER SUGGESTIONS.
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Post by Winnie Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:18 am

:P Okkkaaaaay.
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Post by Aeonarial Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:22 pm

Ohhh Aliens.
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Post by Cial Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:43 am

Part just added, I try not to put tons of detail into the beginning and keep them short and sweet. The rest of the book's content will show more emotion and detail in more emotional parts.
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Post by Cial Fri Dec 18, 2009 7:49 am

I just rewrote the beginning, new character, new start, first person and same idea!
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Post by Cial Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:01 pm

NEW STORY!

Use ctrl+f to find my story on the word gallery page!
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Post by Peregrine Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:10 pm

So this is what happens when Cial is off screen.

Movie references.

Good start, Cial. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by Cial Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:52 pm

Just added more, but it's not over yet! Or until the fat lady sings!
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Post by Cial Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:56 am

Finished this story!
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Post by Peregrine Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:30 pm

You took down a charizard yourself? B-b-b-but. That's my favourite POKeMON. :(

Not sure if I appreciate you defeating my favourite POKeMON. Oh well, it's written well, humourous and it ties into my story so I'LL LET THIS ONE SLIDE.
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Post by Guest Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:37 pm

Charizard sucks, everyone knows Alakazam is superior... just not the shiny one, he is too pink!
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Post by Erik Thu Jun 24, 2010 11:03 am

I liked it :) You inspired me to make my own spinoff of Pere's story! xD Get ready for the tale of how I made my brownies, with my assistant Darre!
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Post by Cial Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:17 am

New post up!
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Post by Winnie Mon Jun 28, 2010 12:35 am

Wow, Spethal. That's possibly the most randomtastic spastic random but relevant story I have ever read.

Heels... :3
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Post by Winnie Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:50 am

Bump.

Also. I loved our wedding.
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Post by Tim Hortans Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:55 am

I couldn't find this thread.
I'm so glad I have

I love you Cial, I actually laughed really hard at some parts.
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Post by Cial Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:00 am

D'aww. You're the greatest ring bearer ever ;D
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Post by DigDog Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:33 am

I really enjoyed reading this, especially the second half.
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Post by Erik Tue Jul 05, 2011 2:55 am

I was waiting for another of these. The wedding was great, but I don't think the timeline of the story is set properly. Hockey game... ALL OF A SUDDEN WEDDING
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Post by Tim Hortans Tue Jul 05, 2011 9:25 pm

What if the wedding.. IS A HOCKEY MATCH?!
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Post by Winnie Tue Jul 05, 2011 9:30 pm

Maybe we got married on ice?
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Post by Tim Hortans Tue Jul 05, 2011 9:47 pm

How romantic
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Post by Cial Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:03 pm

In a prison. On ice in a prison.


Naw, the last story wasn't funny so I gave it up.
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