Discussion on the Other Side of Insanity

by **Juliana** Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:40 pm

So I've decided to take a stab at writing within that crazy script-style and storyline thing. My version pays a lot more attention to my otherwise-minor character. Understand that I wrote the actual story while awake, but waited to write this discuss post until half past one in the morning after wanting to post the thing kept me awake. Nearly all of the jargon the characters trade while acting smart is real with the exception of one word; see if you can find it. Please tell me what you think. The story can be found here.

by **DigDog** Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:11 pm

Intransitory isn't a word, yup.

Anyway, something doesn't work out in that story. So they are chased by a huge swarm of bees and as one approaches, Juli swings around and hammers it into oblivion with a maniacal giggle. Yet just a few minutes later, in the barn, a single bee approaches and Juli is suddenly scared like a little kid. That's rather inconsistent.

by **Tom Gaskarth** Wed Jul 20, 2011 6:23 pm

It seems to be far to clever for me :(

by Mrsebi Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:58 pm

Everything is too clever for you.
And I haven't used the cutlass in AGES! xD

by **Tom Gaskarth** Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:15 pm

And yet I'm still smarter than you.

Is this gonna be just you & Sebi or will you introduce other characters to the story?

by **Tim Hortans** Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:34 pm

Not bad. A bit inconsistent, and I actually UNDERSTOOD what you guys were talking about and it didn't really make sense.

As a side note, near the end of the story you reminded me of a friend named Ben. He likes to talk in Spanish for no reason and he's afraid of bees.

by **Juliana** Thu Jul 21, 2011 12:28 am

There's gonna be other characters, lots of them. In fact, the next event will introduce at least one...

Also, as you'll see, Juli's reaction to the bees at different points is actually consistent with her character. Her very weird character. It makes sense to me, because I actually know what was going on in the characters' heads... hopefully I'll figure out how to make that clear. And just a rule of thumb: these are not normal people. Do not expect them to operate by the same rules that normal people do.

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