Re: Your Awesome Pictures V!

by **Erik** Tue May 04, 2010 5:45 am

Winnie wrote:I know this isn't the focus, but the hand in the upper right corner is spectacular. Amazzzing. :)

Hands, another VERY difficult thing to draw. Tharyougo, you drew above-average in 2 of the harder parts of a human to draw. Stop under-appreciating yourself ;D

by **Winnie** Tue May 04, 2010 6:05 am

What's the other one? Hands and?

by **Erik** Tue May 04, 2010 6:07 am

erikm10 wrote:Well, the eyes look very good, and you have the blessing to draw them well that everyone wishes they have.

by **Winnie** Tue May 04, 2010 6:09 am

Ah. That. Okay.

by **Charon** Tue May 04, 2010 7:20 am

http://www.swfcabin.com/swf-files/1272928450.swf

Firebrand.

by **Erik** Tue May 04, 2010 7:25 am

If I could make a suggestion, you could put bright red runes in the middle of it going up the blade, otherwise it seems a bit bland. Nonetheless awesome!

by **Shadow** Tue May 04, 2010 1:03 pm

Charon... you have a knack for using weapon names already used in DF.
First Black Ice, now Firebrand.
But anyway, I love it! :D
Is it for Nebulae?

by **Winnie** Tue May 04, 2010 6:38 pm

Wow. Yeah. Name already done.

by **Aeonarial** Tue May 04, 2010 9:31 pm

Hey char think you cuold pm me a link under the other site I gave you....black ice and firebrand sound.....intriguing. Also a project I am working on for Web Design....got any suggestions that might make it more appealing?

by **Charon** Wed May 05, 2010 3:35 am

Teehee. Well, I thought of Black Ice before I knew it was in DF, and a Firebrand is not a DF original name at all. Plus, I'm actually calling this the Sarvan Firebrand, so meh. Yes, it's a Sarvan weapon for Nebulae. And yes, Aeo, I'll pm you those sometime soon.

by Guest Wed May 05, 2010 7:00 am

Aeo, here I go. Well, for starters, the flower-ish patter at the top contradicts the completely black background of the page, and the tiger head is a tad -smooshed-.
My suggestions for the background is to do a orange-white stripe pattern, since this is a sport site. Everything else looks nice, although I would suggest changing the font for the "May" part.

Sorry if that sounded too demanding or offensive. I'm too much of a critic.

by **Juliana** Wed May 05, 2010 9:12 am

I'd say that that site is mostly good, though it would probably look better with a white background and--yes, a different font for the name of the month, or else keep that one and change it from "MAY" to "May" for the sake of that-font-looks-odd-in-all-caps.

by **Darre** Wed May 05, 2010 9:53 am

I will be critical with this as I feel that you want some real critisism on this. You have much to large range of colours ( primarily orange, white and black logo, green arrows, red and blue buttons.) I suggest if you have a high enough skill in digital art to remake the arrows and buttons to be primarily orange and black+ a more web 2.0 type look ifyouknowwhatImean. The calendar should be altered to be an image map or flash file. Go with a web 2.0 look there too. On the left sides of the logo you need some bracketed C4Ds (a good example of this would be the Montreal canadiens' site). If you need some help at all just ask me, I'd be glad to help. Otherwise, good luck with it!

by Xusha Mon May 10, 2010 4:18 am

I just gave a spoiler?

by **Aeonarial** Tue May 11, 2010 9:32 pm

Not my best work but still:

by **Winnie** Wed May 12, 2010 3:33 am

That's great! I can't draw people like that... I have no idea why! It's somthing I have to learn, I guess.

I made a webcomic?

Your Awesome Pictures V! - Page 9 Crysan10

Your Awesome Pictures V! - Page 9 Crysan10

by **Juliana** Wed May 12, 2010 6:00 am

Lol, Winnie, that's hilarious... more so for me, of course, since I actually know Drew... did that actually happen? Because I can TOTALLY see that happening. And I take it that's you (MR. SQUEEGEEMAN!) and Kayleen (Collins)?

And, Aeon, I say that's quite impressive (thus says the girl who can't draw to save her life). I do have to ask, though... is the guy supposed to be noseless? And is he shooting a gun, or carrying a stick of dynamite? And what do the words mean?

by **Winnie** Wed May 12, 2010 6:54 am

A) Yes, that actually Happened.

B) Yes, that's me. Mr. SqueegeeMan.

C) No. That's not Kayleen. This was Youth Group Lazertag, and I was actually talking to Frog, my friend you haven't met yet. You should. She's good. Her pack shut off both games, though, so her score was crippled.

by **Aeonarial** Wed May 12, 2010 6:20 pm

The "stick of dynamite" is a gun being fired, his nose is basically right under his hair, and the words were for a friend, I gifted it to him when his gf broke up with him because he likes my drawings so much.