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now that you have done so well, im giving you my seal of awesomeness.

Man, rendering miss bunny was a pain in the *CENSORED*.

I had to get rid of a few detail's and no matter what kind of effects I ran on lucy, she refused to blend with the bg like a proper ninja rabbit. XD

But, I present my gift,

A bunny for lucy (colored)

I decided to wing it on coloring, as I had no idea who lucy really was. Oh, and I know ur a dude, the reason for the pink floral design is I was trying to get lucy to blend as much as possible, but she refused.

No for my super cc post! (hand drawn edition)

Pros on you're work
-The shading is excellent, I can really see the shadows and textures of small details such as clothing and movement, very good.

-The attention to detail is also very life like, small things like the kunai daggers on lucy and the pose on the ninja really portrays felling and depth on the works.

-I see some awesome facial expressions, not just the basic happy or sad, but emotions that say entire essays worth of detail. Take sketch 1 for example, the face say inquisitive, curios, almost bored, and much more.


Con's
Some of you're older works have a problem with smudge mark's. I assume you're using drawing pencils, try to use softer numbers for the sketches and shading, and go heavy for things such as outlining and things you want the onlooker to focus on. I had to cut some stuff out because it was to smudgy, although most of it was because the art wasn't created for colorizing. The newer ones seem to be clean and neat though, so just keep it up. If you know all this already, sorry, didn't mean to belittle a mod. XD

Suggestions- when you scan work in, go over smudges with a white brush to get rid of unwanted marks. Helps allot. And if you want to color in future pieces but can't afford a few grand in programs for a simple hobby, just buy some pastels and do it you're self, the good old fashion way. pastels are one texture you just can't generate in photo shop unless you have the experience, and its much easier to do by hand. Color pencils also make great alternatives.


Allin all- the first time I posted here, I said you had a very prominent future as a concept artist. This is more true and ever. XD

The recoloring looks good, Pyronix!

And thank you for the critic. I'll try to improve and use this as a learning experience.

RAAAGGEE~