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OUR DOMAIN IS ABOUT TO EXPIRE
Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:43 am by V
but I renewed it.
what have YOU done today, TR?
also I'm not sure if heartbleed effected us but you should probably not change your password, the jitterbug gang are working hard and they need …
what have YOU done today, TR?
also I'm not sure if heartbleed effected us but you should probably not change your password, the jitterbug gang are working hard and they need …
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Earthquake! O.o
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Earthquake! O.o
For some reason, I feel the need to write this as a freeverse poem. Don't know why. Here it is.
I am riding the adrenaline rush
That comes from
Sitting down to dinner with your family
Saying a prayer
Starting in on your spaghetti
Then there's a bang
And you have to wonder
Why did everything around you
Leap to the side?
What was that sound?
But your mother knows.
She's seen this before.
And you run for a doorway
For fear of aftershocks.
It's over.
It wasn't very strong.
But I still feel the rush
Because I've finally realized
That that confused second was
My first earthquake.
Obviously, I'm fine. I don't think anything or anyone got hurt, but I've never been in an earthquake before. It was... I don't know if the right word is "exciting" or "scary" or "surprising." Maybe it was all three. But I felt like I needed to write about it. Hope you guys don't mind my bizarre methods of coping (poetry... telling people...)
I am riding the adrenaline rush
That comes from
Sitting down to dinner with your family
Saying a prayer
Starting in on your spaghetti
Then there's a bang
And you have to wonder
Why did everything around you
Leap to the side?
What was that sound?
But your mother knows.
She's seen this before.
And you run for a doorway
For fear of aftershocks.
It's over.
It wasn't very strong.
But I still feel the rush
Because I've finally realized
That that confused second was
My first earthquake.
Obviously, I'm fine. I don't think anything or anyone got hurt, but I've never been in an earthquake before. It was... I don't know if the right word is "exciting" or "scary" or "surprising." Maybe it was all three. But I felt like I needed to write about it. Hope you guys don't mind my bizarre methods of coping (poetry... telling people...)
Juliana- Storyteller!
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Re: Earthquake! O.o
Love it, fast read but I like how you put it together. I'd like to see more poetry in the Sandbox section ^^
Re: Earthquake! O.o
Werent you living here when we had that earthquake about a year ago? I know your brother was... he was sitting next to me....
o.O Also, we have a powtry section under "Word Games"
Very good poem... spaghetti!
o.O Also, we have a powtry section under "Word Games"
Very good poem... spaghetti!
Re: Earthquake! O.o
Yes, Winnie, you're right. I was there when y'all had the earthquake last year... but I don't count that one. Firstly because nobody felt it, and secondly because I didn't even hear it. Maybe my hearing isn't as good as I thought it was; I didn't hear that great big BANG.
Juliana- Storyteller!
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Re: Earthquake! O.o
Mabye, but it was still.....
I was leaning on a trailer in my schoolyard and those arnt very stable......
o.O
I was leaning on a trailer in my schoolyard and those arnt very stable......
o.O
Re: Earthquake! O.o
I was asleep when a small earthquake happened where i live. nothing in my room seemed to be moved :P
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Re: Earthquake! O.o
Alderos wrote:I was asleep when a small earthquake happened where i live. nothing in my room seemed to be moved :P
lol same deal
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We used to get huge ones around here when the mines were still operational..
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I don't think anyone did.
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Re: Earthquake! O.o
so shouldn't we put poem in the word gallery?
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Locked.
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