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Post by Mash Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:37 am

Discuss my new story, Steam Machine.
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Post by Charon Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:25 pm

I simply love it. I love that you have turned AQW from whatever it is now and made it into a realistic and futuristic world where Steam is now the main source of power. Have you ever read the pendragon series? Because your style reminds me of that, only darker, which suits me very well. You have just inspired me to flesh out the tale of Charon and share it with all of you.

As always, good work.
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Post by Aeonarial Sun Jul 05, 2009 8:32 pm

NO NOT CHARON'S TALE!!!!!!!!! Great job Mash, can you put more gore and death into it or is it not that kind of story?
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Post by Mash Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:22 am

Yes. I have a lot more to do. This means I'll hav to add a lot of characters, kill off a lot of characters, and add a lot of plot twists. I'm far from done.
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Post by Cial Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:42 am

Hmmm, I was thinking what if the Archangel Network (Agent X's organization) fit into this dark future somehow?
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Post by Aeonarial Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:54 am

Put me in, kill me off, then put me in again, and repeat.
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Post by Mash Mon Jul 06, 2009 3:14 am

I don't think I'll be using anybody.
I did think of something dealing with an "angel" theme, though. You'll see.
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Post by Charon Mon Jul 06, 2009 3:55 am

I can't wait to see more Mash.
*grabs a pen and some paper*
Now to start my own...
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