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Post by Payton Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:48 am

So tell me what you thought of my story? Should anything be more detailed in my next story? Do you want to be in my next story? If so, who are you and what is your character like? What do you look like?

Discuss.

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Post by Jason Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:02 am

I liked the story, it was well written.

I wanna be in your next story.. I already told you what my sig wep will be. the Star Gazer (Black bulky Star Sword), I'm your evil brother who was once good but turned evil on a mission gone wrong because I fell in a wormholl or something.

I have black long hair, black cloak, black hood, and black pants and shoes.

With a Pink Scarf.
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Post by Payton Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:04 am

Thanks you


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Post by Jason Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:08 am

;D Was I right about what turned me evil?
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Post by Payton Tue Sep 07, 2010 4:08 am

We'll see ;)
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Post by Jason Tue Sep 07, 2010 4:40 am

o.o kay
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Post by Juliana Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:58 am

This should be interesting... I'll be in your story, especially since you've already included me!

Juliana Marie Sundry usually wears her brown hair in a long ponytail and has very green eyes. Most of the time, she'll wear a pink or green dress. Likes to help people. No patience for idiots. And, apparently, she's easily summarized...
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Post by 5secondchaos Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:23 am

I thought the story was very good.

And I would love to be in your next story. Eldred Faldrain. Wearing his large brimmed hat and his cloak he is the Ranger of the Western area's of the currently discovered lands. Without them he is known as Ely. A friendly, kind, protecting person who despises evil. His outfit contains a large hat that looks like the Ranger hat in Lore's Members Shop (Black), a long cloak (Also Black), Some plain running shoes (Black) and cary's his bow and his arrows upon his back. Anything else he wears cannot be seen due to the cloak.
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Post by Payton Thu Sep 09, 2010 4:19 am

Nice. I will be sure to include the "No paitience for idiots" Juliana. And I can most definitely fit you in the next story of the series.
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Post by Guest Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:58 am

Since I was asked through a PM, I guess posting here would be appropriate. Onto my character:

Personality/Character: He is extremely stubborn, and doesn't take crap from anyone. He is two-faced as well, meaning he can be timid and anti-social while he will fight back and defend his cause, regardless of who he is going up against.
Appearance: Very found of long jackets and gloves, because of the cold climate of his homeland. His skin has a very pale complexion, his eyes are a murky green,
with deep bags underneath them. His hair is a shady chocolate color, straight and curly.

That about sums it up. Can't wait to read the new story. ;D
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Post by Payton Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:25 am

Oooh, this will match up perfectly with Juliana's character. A nice character for my series indeed :)
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Post by Guest Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:23 am

Oh, and his name his Geoffrey, because Sticky sounds a bit odd. ;)
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Post by Jason Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:58 pm

o: The storys gonna be in space, rite?
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Post by Payton Fri Sep 10, 2010 4:15 am

No... Lore
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Post by Jason Fri Sep 10, 2010 7:12 am

Ifail, amirite? :D
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Post by Payton Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:01 pm

Yes, also no stories over the weekend :(
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Post by Jason Sat Sep 11, 2010 3:17 am

BLARGH YOU!
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Post by Payton Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:39 am

Back, will began writing again soon
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Post by Guest Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:26 am

Woot. I'm introduced! :D
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Post by Jason Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:06 pm

You are? o.o

Pay let us know when you finish the story.
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Post by Payton Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:11 pm

Ok, I am on it
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Post by Jason Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:11 pm

YAY!
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Post by Payton Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:12 pm

SHould be finished around 4-5 central daylight time. 5-6 eastern
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Post by Jason Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:13 pm

Today? Awesome.
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