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OUR DOMAIN IS ABOUT TO EXPIRE
Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:43 am by V
but I renewed it.
what have YOU done today, TR?
also I'm not sure if heartbleed effected us but you should probably not change your password, the jitterbug gang are working hard and they need …
what have YOU done today, TR?
also I'm not sure if heartbleed effected us but you should probably not change your password, the jitterbug gang are working hard and they need …
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Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
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Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
So tell me what you thought of my story? Should anything be more detailed in my next story? Do you want to be in my next story? If so, who are you and what is your character like? What do you look like?
Discuss.
Discuss.
- Spoiler:
- My next story is subject to change if people want to be included.
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
I liked the story, it was well written.
I wanna be in your next story.. I already told you what my sig wep will be. the Star Gazer (Black bulky Star Sword), I'm your evil brother who was once good but turned evil on a mission gone wrong because I fell in a wormholl or something.
I have black long hair, black cloak, black hood, and black pants and shoes.
With a Pink Scarf.
I wanna be in your next story.. I already told you what my sig wep will be. the Star Gazer (Black bulky Star Sword), I'm your evil brother who was once good but turned evil on a mission gone wrong because I fell in a wormholl or something.
I have black long hair, black cloak, black hood, and black pants and shoes.
With a Pink Scarf.
Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Thanks you
*Noted
*Noted
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
;D Was I right about what turned me evil?
Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
We'll see ;)
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
This should be interesting... I'll be in your story, especially since you've already included me!
Juliana Marie Sundry usually wears her brown hair in a long ponytail and has very green eyes. Most of the time, she'll wear a pink or green dress. Likes to help people. No patience for idiots. And, apparently, she's easily summarized...
Juliana Marie Sundry usually wears her brown hair in a long ponytail and has very green eyes. Most of the time, she'll wear a pink or green dress. Likes to help people. No patience for idiots. And, apparently, she's easily summarized...
Juliana- Storyteller!
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
I thought the story was very good.
And I would love to be in your next story. Eldred Faldrain. Wearing his large brimmed hat and his cloak he is the Ranger of the Western area's of the currently discovered lands. Without them he is known as Ely. A friendly, kind, protecting person who despises evil. His outfit contains a large hat that looks like the Ranger hat in Lore's Members Shop (Black), a long cloak (Also Black), Some plain running shoes (Black) and cary's his bow and his arrows upon his back. Anything else he wears cannot be seen due to the cloak.
And I would love to be in your next story. Eldred Faldrain. Wearing his large brimmed hat and his cloak he is the Ranger of the Western area's of the currently discovered lands. Without them he is known as Ely. A friendly, kind, protecting person who despises evil. His outfit contains a large hat that looks like the Ranger hat in Lore's Members Shop (Black), a long cloak (Also Black), Some plain running shoes (Black) and cary's his bow and his arrows upon his back. Anything else he wears cannot be seen due to the cloak.
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Nice. I will be sure to include the "No paitience for idiots" Juliana. And I can most definitely fit you in the next story of the series.
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Since I was asked through a PM, I guess posting here would be appropriate. Onto my character:
Personality/Character: He is extremely stubborn, and doesn't take crap from anyone. He is two-faced as well, meaning he can be timid and anti-social while he will fight back and defend his cause, regardless of who he is going up against.
Appearance: Very found of long jackets and gloves, because of the cold climate of his homeland. His skin has a very pale complexion, his eyes are a murky green,
with deep bags underneath them. His hair is a shady chocolate color, straight and curly.
That about sums it up. Can't wait to read the new story. ;D
Personality/Character: He is extremely stubborn, and doesn't take crap from anyone. He is two-faced as well, meaning he can be timid and anti-social while he will fight back and defend his cause, regardless of who he is going up against.
Appearance: Very found of long jackets and gloves, because of the cold climate of his homeland. His skin has a very pale complexion, his eyes are a murky green,
with deep bags underneath them. His hair is a shady chocolate color, straight and curly.
That about sums it up. Can't wait to read the new story. ;D
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Oooh, this will match up perfectly with Juliana's character. A nice character for my series indeed :)
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Oh, and his name his Geoffrey, because Sticky sounds a bit odd. ;)
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
o: The storys gonna be in space, rite?
Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
No... Lore
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Ifail, amirite? :D
Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Yes, also no stories over the weekend :(
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
BLARGH YOU!
Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Back, will began writing again soon
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
You are? o.o
Pay let us know when you finish the story.
Pay let us know when you finish the story.
Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Ok, I am on it
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
SHould be finished around 4-5 central daylight time. 5-6 eastern
Payton- RedStarPirate
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Re: Payton's "A Normal day" discussion
Today? Awesome.
Jason- WhiteHairedNoog
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