~ZYELLOWFLASH~ Poet of Nature [OPEN TO ALL]

This is the place where I zyellowflash will do my piece of art and poetry and it will
be my best art of words and i'll be doing some poetry

In the old autumn tree I hear a sound
a sound of prayers.
As the leaves drop they sway by the wind never
ending the path of the beginning, but as I hope
it becomes motionless my hope vanishes to the deep abyss.
It falls like a shard of a pain of misery and despair.
Eventully it stops consuming the pain and suffering as the leaves
touch the ground.
A dew comes from the air as it ends the battle

I'm giveing you guys a chance to post here
by giveing me advice and the constructive critism

The Elements

Fire the rebirth and the death

Darkness the pain and misery

Wind the calm and storms

Water the abyss and void

Earth the nature and humanity

Thunder the rage and scourge

Ice the cold and negative

without all is an incomplete world

but together and all are the elements

Your poetry is beautiful. That much I can say. The only advice I can give is to try to stray away from the mainstream--Try writing about abstract things. The only reason I say this is because elements, nature, and season always seem to be used in poetry already. I think you'd be good at abstract writing, and I will be watching over your future pieces.
Best of luck! ;D ~ Mash