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Post by Valosity Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:58 am

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Poem
The Zardian of Love
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The Zardian of love is a loveable thing
With a feather as a marvelous wing
As AE created it, it has loved them like a friend
But love broke his heart - and now it shall mend

The Zardian a Poet
No one would even love and would alsways yell at him, while he was reading his work "Stow it!"
The Zardian of love, never knew what to do
Then one day, it arose from the blue

He would be a grand poet, sparkling and rich with love
Coming on Valentines day, bring all through a town some love, and each a mug
The Zardian of mysterys he was called
But sadly this love bring was bald

The Zardian of Labor, of loving work
Always had for dinner - a lovly piece of pulled pork from a horc
The Zardian never turned from his goal
But would always make sure to fill everyones bowl with love

A Zardian was never so fine - but was once bypassed,
By a hypnotist, blanking his past
The hyponotist called him, turning him into fear, disgust, and dispise
The Zardian of love was no more- a killing machine in the Gardian tower

Another younge Zardian, pink with color
Set out to fnd his evil relative for a brother, with another
The Zardian snapped at them with it's heart shaped teeth that AE gave it
But the Zardian persisted, and then finally decided to do it bit by bit

Now known as a Zardian in disguise, the Zardian of love resides
He was an increadble zardian to be disbised
The little Zardian went forward, saying his piece
The Zardian listened then had a great feast

Not that he was happy, he had turned more into darkness
Now transforming into a Moglin, Zorbak
When the little pink Zardian drew out a mythical power
He showered the Zardian with love, even at this ugly hour

The shadows fled like the wind, bearing a Zardian on the ground
With a mythical power not known, they transported to home, then there was a great pound
Turning around it was a great crowd who made that sonic boom
And a truth never before known was descovered

AE at the front, honoring the new god
Praising the Zardian of Love with treats and screaming shouts of "What a sweet little pod!"
The Zardian was crowned with love, and the new bestowal of king of the Snugglefest
The Zardian brought much love after, stronger and everlasting unlike before, always striving to do his best

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Note: This poem has been entered in an AE official contest and has a chance at becoming copyrighted to AE.

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Poem
The story of TR
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TR, a clan
Started off with a bam!
Standing for The Regulars,
Owning many ledgers

With a wonderful forum & members,
along with many still catagoryized as penders
Started by a player sitting under a tree
it just happened to be Vamparagon, known as V

The clan took quickly to growth
Appealing to many and most
Everyone loves the TR Cons,
that was the pefect mixture for bonds

All it was was Points Galore,
Many still said "More more more!"
The birth of MoglinTales was exciting
Everyone just to get there were scratching, kick, hitting and biting

MoglinTales isn't the whole deal..
Zards suddenly took to appeal!
With the zards going, Atriax helpign with the game,
It definatally brought TR to fame!

With TR Sound and happy
Little TR duckling went a tapping
Branded with the magic,
They wished for nothing that ever happened to TR was tragic

Far off in the solar system
Was something gathering wisdom
A new planet forming,
With thunder and rain a storming

The planet was to be owned
but first, what would get PWNed?
TR ventured forth, few falling behind
All walking in a strait line, looking to have a lucky find

A planet, just for them!
It even came with a plump hen
They new it at that moment-
The planet was for them, to roam it and put up, branded with TR, a tent.

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Note: Written in the Honor of TR, a great clan. I just wish I could get the ryming part out of my head...

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Story
Death N' Life
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Chapter 1
Valosity roled aside as Emora1 ran up to the lord of the dead: Salackzair (Sal - ak - zaer). The beast reared up on it's hind legs, instantly transforming into a boney Ape, emora went flying between his legs were the very heart of the beast had been only seconds before.

"Dang it!" Shouted Emora
"You will never survive" replyed the ShapeShifter

Once again Emora tried, and failed. Valosity took out his Arachno Bow and shot arrow after arrow, having no luck.

"I do not have time for this! You have no chance in the end anyways.... I still have the Dead & Undead under my power!" Roared the now Demon like Cat.
"Then why don't you just give up, and disappear into the Shadows like the legends always say?" Replied Valosity and Emora in unisin.

With that the Devil transformed into the form that all dread - Drakath. The Chaotic power of his blade pulled it tword the standing two fighters, making it's weilder strike out with a speed and force capable of only light. Both were blown backwards, and saw the stars for only a second - until their vision was coulded by mist not even exsisting and then a black force....

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Chapter 2
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To be continued....







~Valo


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Post by Atriax Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:07 am

Nice poems! a bit of CC.
I think you try too hard to make it rhyme.
The TR one was good, but it would have been better with a bit more flow, and the rhyming didn't help it much. But still, nice to read ^^ (Especially the bits about me, xD
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Post by Valosity Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:42 am

XD, Thanks. I'll try to keep from doing that in my next poem.


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