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Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
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Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
All my poems can be found on my word gallery thread. I'm having a hard time thinking up a theme for my next batch, so suggestions would be nice. Also, feel free to guess what my poems mean. Really. There's no wrong answer.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
how bout u do ur next set on frogs! FTW
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Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Well, most the trick about making poetry is partly about writing about interesting subjects.
For instance, why write about inspiration it self?
Compare it to a delicate light constantly fluttering in the wind, gorgeous glowing lights a wash with a strange beauty all its own.
Theirs lots of things you can write about really, just think out side the box.
like writing about writers block. Poems don't always have to have a solid subject, just keep that in mind.
For instance, why write about inspiration it self?
Compare it to a delicate light constantly fluttering in the wind, gorgeous glowing lights a wash with a strange beauty all its own.
Theirs lots of things you can write about really, just think out side the box.
like writing about writers block. Poems don't always have to have a solid subject, just keep that in mind.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Thanks. And I know what you mean. I've done that a lot, like in this:
"Just a white canvas
And the only way to fill it is to paint
Paint the black in
Because white is the absence of color
The absence of existence
And only you can fill it
Even with black
Even with things you'd rather not remember"
I usually try to fool the reader into thinking what they're reading is something else than what the poem is about. An example is Silver (a poem I wrote), which isn't really about silver at all. I really enjoy doing abstract poetry, and I've done it multiple times. Thanks for the suggestion. :)
"Just a white canvas
And the only way to fill it is to paint
Paint the black in
Because white is the absence of color
The absence of existence
And only you can fill it
Even with black
Even with things you'd rather not remember"
I usually try to fool the reader into thinking what they're reading is something else than what the poem is about. An example is Silver (a poem I wrote), which isn't really about silver at all. I really enjoy doing abstract poetry, and I've done it multiple times. Thanks for the suggestion. :)
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Sorry, I really haven't had time to read through everything yet, but I promise I will. XD
I love you works, they really are works of art in my opinion. I also love how you don't always write about depressing things, mots of the people I know who write poems are always writing about death and destruction, its rare to see good works on creativity and life. The only advice left I would give is to keep pushing to make you're poems and writings better, even if you think its perfect. Also get out of the house as much as possible, increases you're chances of getting inspiration in life.
I have to give you props man.
I love you works, they really are works of art in my opinion. I also love how you don't always write about depressing things, mots of the people I know who write poems are always writing about death and destruction, its rare to see good works on creativity and life. The only advice left I would give is to keep pushing to make you're poems and writings better, even if you think its perfect. Also get out of the house as much as possible, increases you're chances of getting inspiration in life.
I have to give you props man.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Wow. Thanks. I've never gotten too much attention for my writing before, so this is really, really nice. I really wish more people would look into the word gallery as often as they look into the art gallery.
I read your poem, and I like it. You should really continue to write poems, stories, etc. It's be interesting to see someone else's work.
I read your poem, and I like it. You should really continue to write poems, stories, etc. It's be interesting to see someone else's work.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Hey again Mash.
I really like your poems. I'm not usually a poetry reader, but yours is better than a lot of poems I've read. I love the subjects, your style, and your word choice. I'm having a hard time finding anything to criticize. If I think of something, I will let you know, but as of now, these are all great.
Once again, good work!
I really like your poems. I'm not usually a poetry reader, but yours is better than a lot of poems I've read. I love the subjects, your style, and your word choice. I'm having a hard time finding anything to criticize. If I think of something, I will let you know, but as of now, these are all great.
Once again, good work!
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Thanks. I'm done with "The Abstract and the Hyperbole" (my recent collection of poems, when put in a certain order can mean something. They all share similiar topics, and represent an era in time of my poetry.) I'm moving on to my next collection, including The Groove and Machinator, both which I've added. I have more influence than ever, thanks to thanks to the positive feedback.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
I have to add my next poem, "The Dark: Snow and Fog."
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
/jawdrop
Mash, Abiogenesis is amazing. My favorite so far. I would love to see it made into a song.
Mash, Abiogenesis is amazing. My favorite so far. I would love to see it made into a song.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Thanks. :-D
It's not that good.
Still, I'm proud of it. I have a lot of other poems on my DeviantArt (can go there be clicking the globe under my Avi)
It's not that good.
Still, I'm proud of it. I have a lot of other poems on my DeviantArt (can go there be clicking the globe under my Avi)
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
It is that good.
The repititions, the rhymes, the rhythm. They all fit together so well.
The repititions, the rhymes, the rhythm. They all fit together so well.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
"No." has been added.
Strip away the inspiration I got from songs, and you have a very personal poem.
Strip away the inspiration I got from songs, and you have a very personal poem.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Another poem that I would love to see put into song. I love it, Mash. I'v tried poetry before, so I know that it's not easy. You've got skills. :3
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
Thank-you for the support, Char-Bear. I just added Half Empty; this is one of the best I've ever done.
Re: Mash's Poems (Discussion, Suggestions on what to do my next ones on, What do they mean?)
I have to agree with Charon, I definitely like your work.
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