Charon: Scion of Shadow (discussion)

by **Charon** Wed Jul 08, 2009 2:38 pm

Discuss the tale of Charon here.

by **Aeonarial** Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:25 pm

Terrible =P, but really not bad. What are the other elements, how will they fit into the story, and will there be another war?

by **Cial** Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:32 am

Really? You thought THAT was bad? then your writing either must be really really good or you are overly full of yourself. It's great so far, I'd love to help develop it.

by **Charon** Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:34 am

Thanks, 'Cial!
I will probably ask for some suggestions soon since I'd like TR to have a part in it =D

by **Cial** Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:36 am

I have an idea for a guardian of the children...

by **Charon** Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:41 am

The children aren't born together, and they don't know that they are the Scions until they are older.

by **Cial** Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:56 am

I know, but you could have someone hiding and watching (OOoh! Stalkerrrr!) to protect them.

by **Aeonarial** Thu Jul 09, 2009 5:31 am

I think that is the point, but I do not know.

by **Charon** Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:32 am

The thing is, these children are endowed with the powers of the Great Beings, aka the elemental gods, therefore they hardly need a guardian.

by **Aeonarial** Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:30 am

Hope you guys can wait for my story, because it will take forever, and charon, you should become a pro writer.

by **Charon** Thu Jul 09, 2009 11:31 am

Why will it take so long? And why do you think I should go pro?

by **Aeonarial** Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:33 pm

Oh, I was just trying to say something on topic, and it will take so long, because I have to develop the story line, and a bunch of other stuff.

by **Charon** Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:19 pm

Oh I see. Well I should have the next post soon, possily within an hour or two.

by **Juliana** Sun Jul 12, 2009 7:12 am

This is great! Well-written, intriguing, the only problem in my view is that each post is a bit short. It breaks up the scene to have it continued in another post, which makes the physical act of reading it harder for me. I'd recommend editing your second post with every new bit until the scene is finished, maybe putting a little line or something if you feel the need to break it up. Other than that, I'd say it's excellent. Well done.

by **Charon** Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:15 am

I've been wanting to hear from you, Juliana.
That is a very good idea, I think I'll do that! I just get inspiration in short bursts for the actually wording of it, as I have had the actual storyline in my head for about half a year now, something that I've been developing my entire life.

Just added the ending of the first chapter.

by **Juliana** Thu Jul 16, 2009 2:55 pm

I just read the last part of your first chapter, and I just want to say that that was amazing. It makes me want very much to read more.

by **Charon** Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:00 am

Thanks!
I'm glad it turned out well, because I wrote it at 3 in the morning. >.< Inspiration hits me at the worst of times.
And I just added the preface to the second chapter, so now you can read more! This will give you another little peek into my version of Lore and its' history. Hope you like it!

by **Juliana** Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:30 am

Oooh aaah. Creepy and intriguing; this seems to characterize the whole story, as a matter of fact.

And, trust me, I know what it's like to be writing at three in the morning. Inspiration can strike anywhere, anytime, any *cough* mood.

by **Charon** Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:37 pm

Thanks Juli, that's what I'm going for.
Yeah, inspiration hits me in school a lot, which is a pain.

The first part of Chapter Two is done. Go meet Alek and Mash.

by Mash Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:47 pm

I started reading--you're amazing at writing stories! :O I'm only good with short things like poems. I never really knew why.

the person holding me says in the same attractive tone that the other man had used.

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by **Aeonarial** Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:31 pm

Does it not hurt when inspiriation hits? Also, and I know you are not my poster boy, but the story that has a multitude of TR members in it is going to take a while, ecause I just got a job, sorry for the extra wait guys.

by **Charon** Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:35 am

@Mash~I figured that you would like that ;D

@Aeo~Thanks for the heads up and gratz on getting the job, but can we please limit this discussion to my story?

by **Aeonarial** Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:36 am

I know I know sorry, can't wait for the next installment.

by **Juliana** Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:11 am

You killed Mash's friend! :trshocked:

LOL, JK. I love the sudden appearance of new guys, particularly one whom we know. And it is exciting to wonder: Who are these people, anyway, and how the heck did the one come back to life?

by **Charon** Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:02 pm

All shall be revealed in due time. I am still brainstorming exactly how he is to escape from this one, but it shouldn't be long now!

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