Re: Discuss the tales of the one who write the stories included in the thread titled Copyrights and Crowbars, in 3D

[Peregrine]

You asked for some CC, so here it is. Albeit stylishly late.

Pretty good story. I note that you're explaining a lot of the back story after getting into it. I was going to comment on how I was barely following it but now I guess I can't since you only started off without a massive post full of exposition to get people hooked.

One major thing I dislike about your writing style is that you don't use paragraphs during the bold green sections. Blocks of text aren't pretty, Bram. I'd suggest spacing it out a little. You should start a new paragraph every time someone speaks, or at least that's how I learned it.

[Bram]

@Weena, Gohan: Thanks. :D

@Pere: I've been trying to do that, but not many people are speaking right now. And yea, indentation would be a good idea... Thanks. :D

I forgot to mention that the fourth Void Journal entry marks the end of that series... And starts the Void War trilogy. Void War: Book One, Episode One, Part One will be posted as soon as I can get it written. I'll mostly be a lot of introduction and explanation, but it should have enough to keep readers interested... And later episodes will have lots of explosions.

[Felix]

EXPLOSIONS! I wanna make things go boom.

~kthxbai

P.S. Your writing is so epic its not funny..

[Bram]

FINALLY! Void War Chapter One!

[Bram]

Lock please.

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