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Gallery Approval Thread!
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Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Adobe Photoshop CS2 - CS4, Paint.NET
Medium (What you do most of): Digital editing of self-taken photos, or stock images.
*Experience: 2 years of photography. 3 1/2 years of Photoshop experience.
CC:
1: https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
Things that could be done better:
Honestly, it took me about a minute to realize what this was. I just couldn't tell what the focus of the image was due to all the background. As for the text used for 'Energy rush' the green glow on it seems to match the bright flasher, rather than the more dominant darker green, this makes it seem a bit out of place to me.
Things done well:
You did a good job keeping your name small and out of focus, and it it's color blends nicely. Also with text, you kept it out of the main focus, which is another positive. The choice of colors really went over well with me, they just seem to blend really well.
2: https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
Things that could be done better:
The only thing that really got to me was that it struck me as being really light. Tweaking the brightness/contrast would allow for the colors to show up much more clearly than they do now.
Things done well:
I rather like this one. The 'Nova' text blends well with the background, and again, you kept your name small and out of focus. The render matches rather nicely with the chosen colors, and you blended it in almost seamlessly. I also rather liked the 'lens flare' effect you added in there.
=V
Approved. You seem to have Lighting/Airbrushing down in PS (The best I've seen here and the AEFs to be honest.). On your first image I'm critical of the text placement, I think it should of 'covered' the image a little more. Anyways, your CC looks fine and altogether you seem like a very balanced artist. Approved!
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Adobe Photoshop CS2 - CS4, Paint.NET
Medium (What you do most of): Digital editing of self-taken photos, or stock images.
*Experience: 2 years of photography. 3 1/2 years of Photoshop experience.
CC:
1: https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
Things that could be done better:
Honestly, it took me about a minute to realize what this was. I just couldn't tell what the focus of the image was due to all the background. As for the text used for 'Energy rush' the green glow on it seems to match the bright flasher, rather than the more dominant darker green, this makes it seem a bit out of place to me.
Things done well:
You did a good job keeping your name small and out of focus, and it it's color blends nicely. Also with text, you kept it out of the main focus, which is another positive. The choice of colors really went over well with me, they just seem to blend really well.
2: https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
Things that could be done better:
The only thing that really got to me was that it struck me as being really light. Tweaking the brightness/contrast would allow for the colors to show up much more clearly than they do now.
Things done well:
I rather like this one. The 'Nova' text blends well with the background, and again, you kept your name small and out of focus. The render matches rather nicely with the chosen colors, and you blended it in almost seamlessly. I also rather liked the 'lens flare' effect you added in there.
=V
Approved. You seem to have Lighting/Airbrushing down in PS (The best I've seen here and the AEFs to be honest.). On your first image I'm critical of the text placement, I think it should of 'covered' the image a little more. Anyways, your CC looks fine and altogether you seem like a very balanced artist. Approved!
Serena- Queen of AFK
- Number of posts : 71
User Points : 95194
Age : 30
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
There is a simple form you need to fill out in order to be approved.
Note that it is not only your Signatures/Banners/Drawings/whatever you do that counts, but also your ability to give constructive criticism to others.
Form
Example1 Example2
Program(s) you use:I Use photoshop ,paint and my own hand also ican upload to photobucket.
Medium (What you do most of)hmmmm varies from swords to valentines cards
*Experience:Hmmmmm been drawing properly since i was 10 now im nearly 13. got taught by a very good drawer who is now doing A level art and is expected to get an a*My profile picture is another 1of my drawings but its edited to have a blue background ,which makes it look like a bueprint...when my sister was doing gcse art i often got sked does this look ok lol and often gave her advise how to make it look more realistic other things depending on the drawing and the theme i often use themes aswell.
if links dont work chek out my user on photobucket user is dannyandqwerty
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Prototypetagedit2.png
The shape and image of the person needs to be clearer so i think you should shadow or outline it to give it a stronger look making the image more clear and the writing needs to blend in or be outlined aswell.I also think his hand should have something in it because how his hand is shaped it makes him look like he should be holding a ball of ire or an element of some king this area is confusing though.the colours should be more varied but other than that it is welldone because mst things on it go hand in hand with eachother.
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
The brightness of it needs to be toned down otherwise it looks slightly blurry but your name has been well hidden in the corner and i think the font suites the style of picture that it is.you could also use less of the fire type colours and bring in dull darker colours togive the colours more contrast therfore making it stand out well and show the image more clearly. also the colours on the person need to be edited because they don't match there original colours they seem slightly faded as if some one has tweaked the brightness just a little o much.however like i said its good.
here are some other drawings....
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/Dragonoftheweatheringabysscopy.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/brokencswordofcalais-1.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/elfwarrior.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/swordofdeath.jpg
~Enraged~
I'm checking into the whether your drawings are valid or not, seeing that your "The Thinker Punk" was found on flickr.com, drawn by an artist named Rachel Christy.
I found the image at: http://www.flickr.com/photos/rachelchristydesigns/3234275434/
Here is your photobucket: https://s970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/
We do not appreciate plagiarism in our forums. If you can somehow *prove* that you drew that image (by showing us a signature, or validating that you were the original source), I will gladly retract my statement.
Until then,
Try Again.
Note that it is not only your Signatures/Banners/Drawings/whatever you do that counts, but also your ability to give constructive criticism to others.
Form
Example1 Example2
Program(s) you use:I Use photoshop ,paint and my own hand also ican upload to photobucket.
Medium (What you do most of)hmmmm varies from swords to valentines cards
*Experience:Hmmmmm been drawing properly since i was 10 now im nearly 13. got taught by a very good drawer who is now doing A level art and is expected to get an a*My profile picture is another 1of my drawings but its edited to have a blue background ,which makes it look like a bueprint...when my sister was doing gcse art i often got sked does this look ok lol and often gave her advise how to make it look more realistic other things depending on the drawing and the theme i often use themes aswell.
if links dont work chek out my user on photobucket user is dannyandqwerty
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Prototypetagedit2.png
The shape and image of the person needs to be clearer so i think you should shadow or outline it to give it a stronger look making the image more clear and the writing needs to blend in or be outlined aswell.I also think his hand should have something in it because how his hand is shaped it makes him look like he should be holding a ball of ire or an element of some king this area is confusing though.the colours should be more varied but other than that it is welldone because mst things on it go hand in hand with eachother.
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
The brightness of it needs to be toned down otherwise it looks slightly blurry but your name has been well hidden in the corner and i think the font suites the style of picture that it is.you could also use less of the fire type colours and bring in dull darker colours togive the colours more contrast therfore making it stand out well and show the image more clearly. also the colours on the person need to be edited because they don't match there original colours they seem slightly faded as if some one has tweaked the brightness just a little o much.however like i said its good.
here are some other drawings....
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/Dragonoftheweatheringabysscopy.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/brokencswordofcalais-1.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/elfwarrior.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/swordofdeath.jpg
~Enraged~
I'm checking into the whether your drawings are valid or not, seeing that your "The Thinker Punk" was found on flickr.com, drawn by an artist named Rachel Christy.
I found the image at: http://www.flickr.com/photos/rachelchristydesigns/3234275434/
Here is your photobucket: https://s970.photobucket.com/albums/ae188/dannyandqwerty/
We do not appreciate plagiarism in our forums. If you can somehow *prove* that you drew that image (by showing us a signature, or validating that you were the original source), I will gladly retract my statement.
Until then,
Try Again.
Last edited by ragegamer on Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:26 am; edited 25 times in total (Reason for editing : Had to keep editing url's because they were the wrong pictures or done via th wrong website they might still not work =/ .)
dannyandqwerty- New Member
- Number of posts : 5
User Points : 5404
Age : 27
Form
;''There is a simple form you need to fill out in order to be approved.
Note that it is not only your Signatures/Banners/Drawings/whatever you do that counts, but also your ability to give constructive criticism to others.''
oh yeah if you want to see one of my stuff thing in flash here ya go
esacmple
http://megaswf.com/view/a6e5c3c3440a04e19e8ddb76779ca0f6.html
Example 1
Example 2
Program(s) you use: Photoshop
xlrMedium Drawing/sketching)
*Experience:who dosnt have it?
Give Constructive Criticism on the following images:
1.)
I like the blue/white colors mixed with the character
I didnt like the small text
2.)Sig effect ebil style fits with colors, very bright and dark
didnt like the small text yet again
hopefully I did this right?now? xD
[.]
https://2img.net/h/i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii247/Kab0000m/acolyteforums-1.jpghttps://2img.net/h/i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii247/Kab0000m/ebilforums-1.jpg
You have not filled out the form properly
~Flawsie
Note that it is not only your Signatures/Banners/Drawings/whatever you do that counts, but also your ability to give constructive criticism to others.''
oh yeah if you want to see one of my stuff thing in flash here ya go
esacmple
http://megaswf.com/view/a6e5c3c3440a04e19e8ddb76779ca0f6.html
Example 1
Example 2
Program(s) you use: Photoshop
xlrMedium Drawing/sketching)
*Experience:who dosnt have it?
Give Constructive Criticism on the following images:
1.)
I like the blue/white colors mixed with the character
I didnt like the small text
2.)Sig effect ebil style fits with colors, very bright and dark
didnt like the small text yet again
hopefully I did this right?now? xD
[.]
https://2img.net/h/i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii247/Kab0000m/acolyteforums-1.jpghttps://2img.net/h/i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii247/Kab0000m/ebilforums-1.jpg
You have not filled out the form properly
~Flawsie
Last edited by FRC on Sat Aug 08, 2009 9:07 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : failure>?)
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: My works don't really rely on digital programs....it's traditional hand-drawn or other traditional tools..
Medium (What you do most of)Usually pencil drawings...
*Experience:Worked with pencils, prisma colors, paints, ink, pastels, scratchboards, and others I can't really recall atm..xD
Constructive Criticism:
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Tenissswingcopy.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Baseballhomeruncopy.jpg
Well they both seem to have the same style of trying to accomplish movement..but I think it would be better if you would have been more detailed and added more versions of the subject in both drawings as the movement went on, seeing how quick it seems they move from one place to another...needs better transition..though it might of been more tedious to do this..it probably would be a lot more interesting to look at how the subject moved on slowly until it reached the final destination of the movement..
The colors on the first one could use some shading..even if it was as small as the baseball one..it helps to have a bit of shading, if only to make it pop out a bit more..though the choice of colors on the baseball one was a mistake..mainly the gray since it blends into the background and it becomes hard to see the outline of the feet...the colors didn't really matter on the tennis one since it had a white background..but the baseball one did have a colored background so the same use of colors is a bad idea...and needs to be revised to compensate for that..preferably a darker color at least around the feet so it stands out from the gray background...but overall they're both nice simple works..but some more time could be spent to add more details unless you wanted them to be left in that style of simplicity..in which case I think you succeeded ...
~Enraged~
Clean examples, good CC, and a history in the Awesome Pics thread to boot.
Approved
EDIT: I had already approved him 4 hours ago, but my approval disappeared. wth?
Holy crap man, that Zombie piece is hawt, why haven't you done this before?
You forgot to Approve him Pyro xD.. Approved
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Corel Photo-Paint
Medium (What you do most of) Digital color enhancement
*Experience:Before I started working I was going to college to get a certification in Computer Graphics. I'm well versed in Adobe Photoshop and Corel Draw. I also make custom decals for Lego minifigs.
Constructive criticism
Image 1
Image 2
In the first image I really like the use of the twist filter and the colors are really ethereal. The Light bursts really add an extra dimension to the piece.
In the second image I dislike the blending of the character and the background, should have used complimentary colors to bring out the character more.
Excellent CC and you're edits are top notch. Try to elaborate on the CC next time though. Approved?
~Pyronix~
~Enraged~
Yes,
Approved.
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Corel Photo-Paint
Medium (What you do most of) Digital color enhancement
*Experience:Before I started working I was going to college to get a certification in Computer Graphics. I'm well versed in Adobe Photoshop and Corel Draw. I also make custom decals for Lego minifigs.
Constructive criticism
Image 1
Image 2
In the first image I really like the use of the twist filter and the colors are really ethereal. The Light bursts really add an extra dimension to the piece.
In the second image I dislike the blending of the character and the background, should have used complimentary colors to bring out the character more.
Excellent CC and you're edits are top notch. Try to elaborate on the CC next time though. Approved?
~Pyronix~
~Enraged~
Yes,
Approved.
Guest- Guest
This time I'll get it fo sho..
prepare....
ex1
http://megaswf.com/view/618e299868f44b7e2e5fcd8ce5e2615e.html
ex2
http://megaswf.com/view/a6e5c3c3440a04e19e8ddb76779ca0f6.html
Program(s) you use:FL PS JS
Medium (What you do most of) Animations...hopefully you will let me put them here..
*Experience:I draw alot..:D used to work in a group of animators called WCA (west cell animated)
Constructive criticism
1 https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
2 https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
1 oh my god the lighting of this is like super bright it hurts my eyes, but in a good way! it seems out of this world, from a fantasy thing, you see the image is hard to pick out also, which is a minar flaw consideriing the beastly flashing lights(which is hard to do in most programs).
2 This is quite amazing character, the hair pixels, angle, and coloring is just so well detailed with not to bright shadings, and has great contrast. the background is to flashy and blured making the char have little to no effect between the objects.
tis all.
~Enraged~
Although I'm not particularly fond of you choice of an image hosting (please switch to something like photobucket or something), I will pass you. It does meet the requirements, albeit barely with your speedy CC and somewhat questionable demeanor.
I do want to make it clear that some of us are on a bit of a high alert at the moment, due to savior aely's plagiarism bust. Any other offenses found in the future will be promptly deleted and will be recommended to vamp for further review for possible infractions.
Approved.
ex1
http://megaswf.com/view/618e299868f44b7e2e5fcd8ce5e2615e.html
ex2
http://megaswf.com/view/a6e5c3c3440a04e19e8ddb76779ca0f6.html
Program(s) you use:FL PS JS
Medium (What you do most of) Animations...hopefully you will let me put them here..
*Experience:I draw alot..:D used to work in a group of animators called WCA (west cell animated)
Constructive criticism
1 https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
2 https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
1 oh my god the lighting of this is like super bright it hurts my eyes, but in a good way! it seems out of this world, from a fantasy thing, you see the image is hard to pick out also, which is a minar flaw consideriing the beastly flashing lights(which is hard to do in most programs).
2 This is quite amazing character, the hair pixels, angle, and coloring is just so well detailed with not to bright shadings, and has great contrast. the background is to flashy and blured making the char have little to no effect between the objects.
tis all.
~Enraged~
Although I'm not particularly fond of you choice of an image hosting (please switch to something like photobucket or something), I will pass you. It does meet the requirements, albeit barely with your speedy CC and somewhat questionable demeanor.
I do want to make it clear that some of us are on a bit of a high alert at the moment, due to savior aely's plagiarism bust. Any other offenses found in the future will be promptly deleted and will be recommended to vamp for further review for possible infractions.
Approved.
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Example 3
Program(s) you use:i use Blender,Photoshop,paint.net,& Gimp
Medium (What you do most of)Cs3 Photoshop
*Experience:ive been using photoshop for 2 years! & im good at it! but im not pro! all i need to do is follow some tuts! and gets some brushes & im all set to go!\
~Enraged~
You need to fill out the rest of the Form, specifically the Constructive Criticism bit.
Try Again
Example 1 Example 2
Example 3
Program(s) you use:i use Blender,Photoshop,paint.net,& Gimp
Medium (What you do most of)Cs3 Photoshop
*Experience:ive been using photoshop for 2 years! & im good at it! but im not pro! all i need to do is follow some tuts! and gets some brushes & im all set to go!\
~Enraged~
You need to fill out the rest of the Form, specifically the Constructive Criticism bit.
Try Again
Viral- New Member
- Number of posts : 14
User Points : 5460
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Example 1
Example 2
Programs I use: I use paint, Adobe Photoshop Elements 5.0 and Hp Photosmart Essentials 3.5
Things i use most: Well mainly when it comes to screenshots i use picnik and paint
Experience: I draw alot, most of the day infact and i have been to many gallery expoditions also i have been to a proffesional art drawing session 4 times
=V
Please do not use your own images for constructed criticism. Use the ones given in the first post, instead.
[code]
Constructive criticism:
1. https://2img.net/h/i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii247/Kab0000m/ebilforums-1.jpg
1-1. As this was another artist's work the constructive criticism i would give would be. This is a very good picture there is hardly anything wrong with this picture but the colour flow well its hard to describe but the colour flow seems a little weak so maybee the red could be perhaps a darker red instead of a pinkish colour
but overall it is a very good picture well done
2. https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Kaoticgiftcopy.png
2-2. As constructive criticism i would write. This is a very good computer aided design yet there is only one problem, the writing says kaotic toxic hazard, i can guess that it says hazard, but if you didnt know the word hazard you wouldnt know what it says because the black doesnt go very well on the green and i would go for a different colour that stands out on green so its easier to read.
Thats all i can really do. Sorry that there images but i use an Imac and it links up wierd. And yeah i sound a little nooby i didnt really know what to put :/
~Enraged~
A apologize for not getting to this sooner. Your work is good, with the line quality being very direct and not messy. I question the color used in the second example, but hey, whatever floats your boat.
Approved
Example 2
Programs I use: I use paint, Adobe Photoshop Elements 5.0 and Hp Photosmart Essentials 3.5
Things i use most: Well mainly when it comes to screenshots i use picnik and paint
Experience: I draw alot, most of the day infact and i have been to many gallery expoditions also i have been to a proffesional art drawing session 4 times
=V
Please do not use your own images for constructed criticism. Use the ones given in the first post, instead.
[code]
Constructive criticism:
1. https://2img.net/h/i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii247/Kab0000m/ebilforums-1.jpg
1-1. As this was another artist's work the constructive criticism i would give would be. This is a very good picture there is hardly anything wrong with this picture but the colour flow well its hard to describe but the colour flow seems a little weak so maybee the red could be perhaps a darker red instead of a pinkish colour
but overall it is a very good picture well done
2. https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Kaoticgiftcopy.png
2-2. As constructive criticism i would write. This is a very good computer aided design yet there is only one problem, the writing says kaotic toxic hazard, i can guess that it says hazard, but if you didnt know the word hazard you wouldnt know what it says because the black doesnt go very well on the green and i would go for a different colour that stands out on green so its easier to read.
Thats all i can really do. Sorry that there images but i use an Imac and it links up wierd. And yeah i sound a little nooby i didnt really know what to put :/
~Enraged~
A apologize for not getting to this sooner. Your work is good, with the line quality being very direct and not messy. I question the color used in the second example, but hey, whatever floats your boat.
Approved
Last edited by 5secondchaos on Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:16 am; edited 1 time in total
5secondchaos- Platinum Vampire - Art Fanatic!
- Zard :
Number of posts : 1476
User Points : 21374
Age : 29
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
No, alll you need to do is talk to an art gallery mod and ask them to give you pictures to critique, I had to do the same thing.
Aeonarial- Brother/Artist/Writer
- Zard :
Number of posts : 1549
User Points : 11392
Age : 31
Location : Atlanta, Georgia
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Look at page 2, Pyro posted new images to crit.
Serena- Queen of AFK
- Number of posts : 71
User Points : 95194
Age : 30
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Iron Draconian Head
Example 2 Shadow Draconian Elite
Program(s) you use:Paint.Net
Medium (What you do most of) Editing Work, Computer Drawing and Pencil Drawing
*Experience: Playing Around With Dragon and Monster Designs
Constructive Criticism 1: https://2img.net/h/i4.photobucket.com/albums/y138/Ashclaw/AlphaPirateRouge.jpg
Nice job on the pink coat, but I would have liked to see some color work done on the pants and undershirt, maybe replace the gun with something silly like a giant lipstick case, scar could also be recolored or removed.
Constuctive criticism 2: https://2img.net/h/i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg68/icejojoice/002.jpg
The whip has a nice flow to it on the ends, it looks almost like twisted branches but it would need solid heads on the end of each piece to be a proper flail and the handle should be lengthend so it would be visible behind the hand without being covered.
Approved.
-Vamp
Example 1 Iron Draconian Head
Example 2 Shadow Draconian Elite
Program(s) you use:Paint.Net
Medium (What you do most of) Editing Work, Computer Drawing and Pencil Drawing
*Experience: Playing Around With Dragon and Monster Designs
Constructive Criticism 1: https://2img.net/h/i4.photobucket.com/albums/y138/Ashclaw/AlphaPirateRouge.jpg
Nice job on the pink coat, but I would have liked to see some color work done on the pants and undershirt, maybe replace the gun with something silly like a giant lipstick case, scar could also be recolored or removed.
Constuctive criticism 2: https://2img.net/h/i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg68/icejojoice/002.jpg
The whip has a nice flow to it on the ends, it looks almost like twisted branches but it would need solid heads on the end of each piece to be a proper flail and the handle should be lengthend so it would be visible behind the hand without being covered.
Approved.
-Vamp
Lord Deathwing- Dragon God
- Number of posts : 13
User Points : 10738
Age : 34
Location : Grim Batol
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1
Example 2
Program(s) you use: paint.net
Medium (What you do most of)Aqworlds armor recolors and edits.
*Experience:Have been doing this for several months now.
Constructive Criticism 1:
well first off it's kinda hard too see who he is do too the lighting and the fact that the red makes him blend in very well,not that thats a bad thing and and well the color of the font could be a bit different
Constructive criticism 2: ahhh very bright!
anyway the scarf looks like a dragon on close inspection but it's very hard to see. the bubbles don't fit very well in the environment of the picture and could be removed.
~Enraged~
I've seen you do several edits in the "Custom Armors" thread for a while now. I'll approve you, but I do need to mention that the first example is rather for most people's taste, to which I advise that you perhaps make it... umm... bigger. The second example, on the other hand, is very polished if only for the subtle jagged edges around the chest area.
Also to note: Constructive Criticism has three unwritten rules to it.
1. Gently telling the artist how they may improve the image.
2. Pointing out what the artist is doing right so that they may expand on it.
3. Making sure that the actual CC is legible.
With time, you'll get it. Have fun with your gallery!
Approved
Example 1
Example 2
Program(s) you use: paint.net
Medium (What you do most of)Aqworlds armor recolors and edits.
*Experience:Have been doing this for several months now.
Constructive Criticism 1:
well first off it's kinda hard too see who he is do too the lighting and the fact that the red makes him blend in very well,not that thats a bad thing and and well the color of the font could be a bit different
Constructive criticism 2: ahhh very bright!
anyway the scarf looks like a dragon on close inspection but it's very hard to see. the bubbles don't fit very well in the environment of the picture and could be removed.
~Enraged~
I've seen you do several edits in the "Custom Armors" thread for a while now. I'll approve you, but I do need to mention that the first example is rather for most people's taste, to which I advise that you perhaps make it... umm... bigger. The second example, on the other hand, is very polished if only for the subtle jagged edges around the chest area.
Also to note: Constructive Criticism has three unwritten rules to it.
1. Gently telling the artist how they may improve the image.
2. Pointing out what the artist is doing right so that they may expand on it.
3. Making sure that the actual CC is legible.
With time, you'll get it. Have fun with your gallery!
Approved
Nagi- Bucket Queen
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Age : 28
Location : with my laptop...duh
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Example 1
Example 2
Program(s) you use: MSPaint, Photobucket, Photoshop, Adobe Illustrator.
Medium (What you do most of)Aq Worlds armor/weapons recolor`s and edits.
*Experience: A week or two now.
Constructive Criticism 1
The scenery is all blurred and part of the closest gun is totally blanked out as far as i can see the only thing that is really visible is the faces and shoulders but i suppose for a a photo taken in a battle its alright.
Constructive Criticism 2
Well i cant really tell what`a going on there`s too much action at once and its a really dark picture except for a few areas but i love the bright green and it would be a great MechQuest poster or star wars or something like that and i think if you put like a bright sun or something in the background even an explosion would work to light up the area.
Approved
~Flawsie
Example 2
Program(s) you use: MSPaint, Photobucket, Photoshop, Adobe Illustrator.
Medium (What you do most of)Aq Worlds armor/weapons recolor`s and edits.
*Experience: A week or two now.
Constructive Criticism 1
The scenery is all blurred and part of the closest gun is totally blanked out as far as i can see the only thing that is really visible is the faces and shoulders but i suppose for a a photo taken in a battle its alright.
Constructive Criticism 2
Well i cant really tell what`a going on there`s too much action at once and its a really dark picture except for a few areas but i love the bright green and it would be a great MechQuest poster or star wars or something like that and i think if you put like a bright sun or something in the background even an explosion would work to light up the area.
Approved
~Flawsie
Banned- Member
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User Points : 5065
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Adobe Photoshop CS 3
Medium (What you do most of) CS 3
*Experience: Two years ago, I started with photoshop. I made alot of signatures, wallpapers and editting photos. Now I know much more about photoshop and making signatures.
Give Constructive Criticism on the following images:
Image 1
The render is nice blended into the background, but maybe a bit too much, the focus point is a bit lost. I would sharpen the render a bit more, and blur the background a bit.
I like the text, the text is most times one of the difficult things when making a signature. The green light sources look good, specially the big green blast. Overal it's a good signature with a good looking text and the mirror effect in the bottom is great!
Image 2
I would choose one soldier and not two, or blur the second soldier more. The blending is good but because everything has almost the same colors, the focus point is lost. The lightdots are OK except the one on the left bottom, all the others are on the light right side. It's a good signature with a good color use, but the soldiers are too much blended between the colors.
~Enraged~
Good edits, good CC.
Approved
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Adobe Photoshop CS 3
Medium (What you do most of) CS 3
*Experience: Two years ago, I started with photoshop. I made alot of signatures, wallpapers and editting photos. Now I know much more about photoshop and making signatures.
Give Constructive Criticism on the following images:
Image 1
The render is nice blended into the background, but maybe a bit too much, the focus point is a bit lost. I would sharpen the render a bit more, and blur the background a bit.
I like the text, the text is most times one of the difficult things when making a signature. The green light sources look good, specially the big green blast. Overal it's a good signature with a good looking text and the mirror effect in the bottom is great!
Image 2
I would choose one soldier and not two, or blur the second soldier more. The blending is good but because everything has almost the same colors, the focus point is lost. The lightdots are OK except the one on the left bottom, all the others are on the light right side. It's a good signature with a good color use, but the soldiers are too much blended between the colors.
~Enraged~
Good edits, good CC.
Approved
Gast- Guest
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Example 1 (Tag)
Example 2 (Sprite)
Programs: Paint.Net, Photoshop
Mediums: Edits, Tags
Experience: About 1-2 years. Not too sure.
CC 1:
Awesome tag, it has a great chaotic feel too it. However, the 4 green sparks are very distracting, and take the focus off the render. Also, the water effect at the bottom doesn't really fit in with the feel of it.
CC 2:
Woah! A really evil theme to it, done very well. The render blends in well, but perhaps too well. Some sharpening could fix that. I also think the text hasn't been done all that well, it looks quite plain and doesn't fit well with it. Perhaps are more evil feeling font could be used.
Shadow :D
I <3 you and your work, APPROVED ^_^
~Flawsie
Example 2 (Sprite)
Programs: Paint.Net, Photoshop
Mediums: Edits, Tags
Experience: About 1-2 years. Not too sure.
CC 1:
Awesome tag, it has a great chaotic feel too it. However, the 4 green sparks are very distracting, and take the focus off the render. Also, the water effect at the bottom doesn't really fit in with the feel of it.
CC 2:
Woah! A really evil theme to it, done very well. The render blends in well, but perhaps too well. Some sharpening could fix that. I also think the text hasn't been done all that well, it looks quite plain and doesn't fit well with it. Perhaps are more evil feeling font could be used.
Shadow :D
I <3 you and your work, APPROVED ^_^
~Flawsie
Last edited by Shadow on Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:02 am; edited 1 time in total
Shadow- this is a title
- Number of posts : 3430
User Points : 572074
Age : 29
Location : New Zealand
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Hiyas
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: GIMP,PSE,Paint
Medium (What you do most of)GIMP
*Experience: 2 years.
You need to fill out the entire sheet, with the CC included.
~Flawsie
ok ill get right on it
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
I love the mysterious look but the green lights are annoying and are in like a square pattern wich makes it look a little odd. If you made the lights smaller and put more of them i believe it would look better. The text "energy rush" does however fit with the lights so I wouldnt entirely get rid of them.
Ok now for number 2
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Kaoticgiftcopy.png
Overall this image looks good but there was one thing that immediately caught my eye. The green flames are stronger on the left side so I would make the right side more appealing by adding more flames. This work has an excellent use of different brushes and has a good color scheme for the render. The text is good because it looks like it is melted with acid. Overall, this is an amazing piece with some flaws but it still works well.
Approved, welcome to the Gallery
~Flawsie
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: GIMP,PSE,Paint
Medium (What you do most of)GIMP
*Experience: 2 years.
You need to fill out the entire sheet, with the CC included.
~Flawsie
ok ill get right on it
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
I love the mysterious look but the green lights are annoying and are in like a square pattern wich makes it look a little odd. If you made the lights smaller and put more of them i believe it would look better. The text "energy rush" does however fit with the lights so I wouldnt entirely get rid of them.
Ok now for number 2
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Kaoticgiftcopy.png
Overall this image looks good but there was one thing that immediately caught my eye. The green flames are stronger on the left side so I would make the right side more appealing by adding more flames. This work has an excellent use of different brushes and has a good color scheme for the render. The text is good because it looks like it is melted with acid. Overall, this is an amazing piece with some flaws but it still works well.
Approved, welcome to the Gallery
~Flawsie
Walt- FireAnt
- Number of posts : 632
User Points : 148677
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Flaw you do realize like 4 people have used that donkey kong to get approved righT?
Banned- Member
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User Points : 5065
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1
Example 2
Aviary: Phoenix Image Editor (and some Phot Shop)
Medium: Screenchots, Phoenix
Experience: Good Enough
I can do more than just this but I was pressed for time and just put some stuff together in a hurry.
Ok, but please make sure to fill out the form properly!
~Kao
Ok
Constructive criticism:
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
Looks cool but the green lights really just don't seem to have a point at that level of brightness, if they were dimmed down a bit it would make Zeratul pop out a lot more.
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
Looks great but the light really doesn't help all that much, it almost seems to be the center of focus in this piece, perhaps move the character in front of it and give him a corona of light.
Great CC but your examples are the same thing, duplicates,
Wish you luck in the world of the Art gallery!
~Approved~
^_^^
Example 1
Example 2
Aviary: Phoenix Image Editor (and some Phot Shop)
Medium: Screenchots, Phoenix
Experience: Good Enough
I can do more than just this but I was pressed for time and just put some stuff together in a hurry.
Ok, but please make sure to fill out the form properly!
~Kao
Ok
Constructive criticism:
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
Looks cool but the green lights really just don't seem to have a point at that level of brightness, if they were dimmed down a bit it would make Zeratul pop out a lot more.
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Novatag.png
Looks great but the light really doesn't help all that much, it almost seems to be the center of focus in this piece, perhaps move the character in front of it and give him a corona of light.
Great CC but your examples are the same thing, duplicates,
Wish you luck in the world of the Art gallery!
~Approved~
^_^^
Caeel- LuvaBoy
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Number of posts : 1503
User Points : 505753
Age : 27
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use:
Paint.NET, Corel Paint Shop Pro X2
Medium (What you do most of)
Paint.NET
*Experience:
Over 3 years of working with Paint.NET.
Constructive Criticism:
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
Very creative, a type of art that can not be described with letters alone. So realistic as well, as if it were a close-up of a microchip. With a rating out of ten, I would give it 9!
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Kaoticgiftcopy.png
Realistic in texture, very descriptive in words, as well as imagery. So breath-taking, and at the same time life-giving. In a list of the top ten, this would take fourth!
=V
Your CC ability needs alot of work; You really didn't say anything helpful about the pieces, but you are moderately good at DA. Either way, being accepted into the gallery would help you improve. So, approved.
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use:
Paint.NET, Corel Paint Shop Pro X2
Medium (What you do most of)
Paint.NET
*Experience:
Over 3 years of working with Paint.NET.
Constructive Criticism:
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Verticaltuttagcopy.png
Very creative, a type of art that can not be described with letters alone. So realistic as well, as if it were a close-up of a microchip. With a rating out of ten, I would give it 9!
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Kaoticgiftcopy.png
Realistic in texture, very descriptive in words, as well as imagery. So breath-taking, and at the same time life-giving. In a list of the top ten, this would take fourth!
=V
Your CC ability needs alot of work; You really didn't say anything helpful about the pieces, but you are moderately good at DA. Either way, being accepted into the gallery would help you improve. So, approved.
Approved Artist
Form
New Halo Tag
Samus Aran Vertical Tag
Program(s) you use:Photoshop CS4, Flash CS4, Cinema 4D, GIMP, Apophysis, and Paint.net. ^_^ A lot eh?
Medium:Tags, and about everything else. >.> I am working on making flash weapons.
*Experience:About a Year...
CnC:
Pyronix's "Nova" Tag.
This tag is the better out of the two tags that I am constructively Criticizing, due to the fact that it appeals more than the other. The typography in this tag is alright, but could be better by adding a clipping mask rather than lowering the opacity, also the BG is nice but it just looks like a stock where you re-sized and slapped on a render and put a few sparks in front. Work on that. Even though I know you are way better now, and these are old....I will go easy on you...
Pyronix's "Energy" tag.
This tag is one of your worsts, in my opinion, there is no Definative light source, and there are to many Light Sparks, The Render is blended with everything else, where as it should only be blending with some of the stuff around it, work on that and it could be better, also there is no depth, plus the fact that you did the duplicate on the bottom is wierd, most of the time it works, but in this case, DO NOT USE it. >.>
I hope I will be approved. xD
Also, I noticed that there aren't many "Taggers" or people who are good at CnCing a Tag, just look at the post before mine by "Jman228", he said something completely untrue about the piece that I just Criticized, and almost all of the people that posted to be approved either didn't post CnC or they are completely wrong about some pieces...
=V
Stellar! Approved.
Last edited by Vamparagon on Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:42 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Needed to fix some coding. >.>)
Lama- Member
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User Points : 46660
Age : 34
Location : Texas
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Gimp, Pivot, Paint
Medium (What you do most of) Tags, banners... everything really
*Experience: 3 years maybe
CnC
Image 1 Image 2
Image 1- This is a well made tag, I like the way that the focal is easily spotted and the lighting supports it. The explosion effect is creative and useful. The text isn't great, but the placement isn't very good. Text in corners is almost always unfitting. This one should be near the tag's focal to bring any more attention to it.
Image 2- This tag isn't as nice as the first. The text font is a perfect fit, but the placement is even worse. The focal isn't supported by this text. To make it confusing, this tag doesn't even have a focal. There are too many lighted spots on the render to make it seem strange. The background is also too much to make the render fit in. It blends in too much making the render hard to see and the light spots don't help at all...
I like your examples, and you seem to be pretty adept at CCing.
Correct me if I'm wrong guys, but...
Approved!
CtS~
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Gimp, Pivot, Paint
Medium (What you do most of) Tags, banners... everything really
*Experience: 3 years maybe
CnC
Image 1 Image 2
Image 1- This is a well made tag, I like the way that the focal is easily spotted and the lighting supports it. The explosion effect is creative and useful. The text isn't great, but the placement isn't very good. Text in corners is almost always unfitting. This one should be near the tag's focal to bring any more attention to it.
Image 2- This tag isn't as nice as the first. The text font is a perfect fit, but the placement is even worse. The focal isn't supported by this text. To make it confusing, this tag doesn't even have a focal. There are too many lighted spots on the render to make it seem strange. The background is also too much to make the render fit in. It blends in too much making the render hard to see and the light spots don't help at all...
I like your examples, and you seem to be pretty adept at CCing.
Correct me if I'm wrong guys, but...
Approved!
CtS~
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Kirimat / Tamirik
(That counts as two right?)
Program(s) you use: Flash/PS
Medium (What you do most of) Flash
*Experience: Not all that long in flash, maybe 3/4 months. PS about a year.
CnC
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Baseballintotennisballcopy.jpg
Well, I found it strange. The tennisball was coloured but not the baseball. It's not weird enough to be surreal. To improve it, I'd make the explosion appear more 3d, maybe by having the perspective from the center. The motion ines could be improved too, by maybe having them not connect to the ball. I almost mistook it for shading.
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Tenissswingcopy.jpg
Here, the backhand semi-volley, the racquet seems to be held the wrong way rond, and in the left hand. The racquet also seems slightly wobbly, and too short. With a racquet like that, she's not going to wimbledon.
(You've used my Gallery Guide, so it can't do much harm can it? :P
Well well well, looks whos here. =P
Fine CC on the hand drawn pieces, exellent eye for detail or lack thierof. Flash seems to be pretty decent as well. Approved
Pyronix
Kirimat / Tamirik
(That counts as two right?)
Program(s) you use: Flash/PS
Medium (What you do most of) Flash
*Experience: Not all that long in flash, maybe 3/4 months. PS about a year.
CnC
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Baseballintotennisballcopy.jpg
Well, I found it strange. The tennisball was coloured but not the baseball. It's not weird enough to be surreal. To improve it, I'd make the explosion appear more 3d, maybe by having the perspective from the center. The motion ines could be improved too, by maybe having them not connect to the ball. I almost mistook it for shading.
https://2img.net/h/i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm78/Pyronix15/Tenissswingcopy.jpg
Here, the backhand semi-volley, the racquet seems to be held the wrong way rond, and in the left hand. The racquet also seems slightly wobbly, and too short. With a racquet like that, she's not going to wimbledon.
(You've used my Gallery Guide, so it can't do much harm can it? :P
Well well well, looks whos here. =P
Fine CC on the hand drawn pieces, exellent eye for detail or lack thierof. Flash seems to be pretty decent as well. Approved
Pyronix
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Photoshop CS3/CS4
Medium (What you do most of) Photoshop Work
*Experience: 2 Years
Image one cnc Image
A nice abstract piece. It is well made with high quality effects, but is lacking in many ways. The piece has awesome color spectrum of monotone green. Loving it. What pulls it down is the amount of focals. Multiple focals make a viewers eyes jump around, never being able to capture the true beauty. I would suggest limiting the light sources and making one large focal. Draw the viewer in, entrance them. This piece is sharpened well, but a bit too well. The artist needs to keep in mind depth and flow. Blurring the background a bit and some of the foreground will produce drastic flow and immense depth. Text suits this tag very well.
Image 2 cnc image
Great job on flow with this tag. It is the first thing I notice. Great use of blending colors from light to dark, and in the correct variational directions. Depth is decent and uses a great sense of sharpness. I would suggest beldning the circles better or making them look as if moving... or in motion. Text also could use some work as it is distracting. Always, text should be right next to a focal, not in the corner being unimportant. Text is a huge part of tag making.
=V
Your tagging work is very impressive, and you seem to have good CnC as well. Approved!
Example 1 Example 2
Program(s) you use: Photoshop CS3/CS4
Medium (What you do most of) Photoshop Work
*Experience: 2 Years
Image one cnc Image
A nice abstract piece. It is well made with high quality effects, but is lacking in many ways. The piece has awesome color spectrum of monotone green. Loving it. What pulls it down is the amount of focals. Multiple focals make a viewers eyes jump around, never being able to capture the true beauty. I would suggest limiting the light sources and making one large focal. Draw the viewer in, entrance them. This piece is sharpened well, but a bit too well. The artist needs to keep in mind depth and flow. Blurring the background a bit and some of the foreground will produce drastic flow and immense depth. Text suits this tag very well.
Image 2 cnc image
Great job on flow with this tag. It is the first thing I notice. Great use of blending colors from light to dark, and in the correct variational directions. Depth is decent and uses a great sense of sharpness. I would suggest beldning the circles better or making them look as if moving... or in motion. Text also could use some work as it is distracting. Always, text should be right next to a focal, not in the corner being unimportant. Text is a huge part of tag making.
=V
Your tagging work is very impressive, and you seem to have good CnC as well. Approved!
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
EDIT: @Above That is AWESOME Great job :D
Form
Example 1Example 2
On Example 2 I know the head is a bit small.
Program(s) you use: My Hands. (I use two) :D
Medium (What you do most of) Pencils, Pens, etc
*Experience: I usually draw when I am bored in school. Go figure. Don't we all feel that way during class sometimes? I know I do especially, in Algebra class.
EDIT: Sorry for not posting this in the correct place Vamp but here it is now!
Please criticize my work constructively.
Constructively Criticize these two images:
Image One
Image Two
CtS~
@CtS there great!
I have no critisism
Right, lets get started here. CC, or constructive criticism, is a general critique of a piece of art. To say there is no CC is to say there is no flaw, and I find that hard to believe seeing as I put these up because they had major flaws. I like that you like my work, but read the posts of others, and try to figure out what makes something artistic. If you have trouble, try CC'ing from the hand drawn section or in an extreme case pm me for advice.
~Pyronix~
Form
Example 1Example 2
On Example 2 I know the head is a bit small.
Program(s) you use: My Hands. (I use two) :D
Medium (What you do most of) Pencils, Pens, etc
*Experience: I usually draw when I am bored in school. Go figure. Don't we all feel that way during class sometimes? I know I do especially, in Algebra class.
EDIT: Sorry for not posting this in the correct place Vamp but here it is now!
Please criticize my work constructively.
Constructively Criticize these two images:
Image One
Image Two
CtS~
@CtS there great!
I have no critisism
Right, lets get started here. CC, or constructive criticism, is a general critique of a piece of art. To say there is no CC is to say there is no flaw, and I find that hard to believe seeing as I put these up because they had major flaws. I like that you like my work, but read the posts of others, and try to figure out what makes something artistic. If you have trouble, try CC'ing from the hand drawn section or in an extreme case pm me for advice.
~Pyronix~
Last edited by Pyronix on Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:47 am; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Apology, and review for above work)
Re: Gallery Approval Thread!
Form
Example 1
Example 2
Program(s) you use: I use Adobe Photoshop Elements 6 and on a very rare occasion Corel Painter
Medium (What you do most of) When I'm not doing CG work I use a combination of prisma color markers, charcoal, and inking pens. I'll sometimes paint but that's very very rare.
*Experience:
I have been a member of deviantart for three years (if you don't know what that is, it's basically like a myspace for artists) and have over 100 pieces of work submitted on my page. I have taken a drawing and painting course at my high school. I have drawn designs for club posters, t-shirts, and flyers.
Constructive Criticism
1. The Kaotic Toxic Hazard picture:
I really like this picture. My favorite aspect of it is that it has depth to it. It makes you feel like you're being pulled inside....or maybe like you're falling into a vat of toxic waste xD and that's tight! I also like the effects used on the font to make the letters appear as a part of the substance in the picure instead of being a layer that's just slapped on top of it.
2. The Energy Rush picture:
Wow....this is really neat! I like the reflection effect on the bottom. It made me feel like I was in a spaceship or something...and I was watching some commets or whatver flying around in space. I like the motion and the colors of this work. They're very pleasing to the eye and invigorating just to look at. You could totally make money by selling that pattern to some energy drink company to decorate the outside of their cans. I also think it's great that you balanced the whole work out by not making all the little orbs of light the same size. Some larger, some smaller....it's a great compostion! :D
Nice CC, and great artwork!
How could I not approve you? :3
Approved!
CtS~
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Program(s) you use: I use Adobe Photoshop Elements 6 and on a very rare occasion Corel Painter
Medium (What you do most of) When I'm not doing CG work I use a combination of prisma color markers, charcoal, and inking pens. I'll sometimes paint but that's very very rare.
*Experience:
I have been a member of deviantart for three years (if you don't know what that is, it's basically like a myspace for artists) and have over 100 pieces of work submitted on my page. I have taken a drawing and painting course at my high school. I have drawn designs for club posters, t-shirts, and flyers.
Constructive Criticism
1. The Kaotic Toxic Hazard picture:
I really like this picture. My favorite aspect of it is that it has depth to it. It makes you feel like you're being pulled inside....or maybe like you're falling into a vat of toxic waste xD and that's tight! I also like the effects used on the font to make the letters appear as a part of the substance in the picure instead of being a layer that's just slapped on top of it.
2. The Energy Rush picture:
Wow....this is really neat! I like the reflection effect on the bottom. It made me feel like I was in a spaceship or something...and I was watching some commets or whatver flying around in space. I like the motion and the colors of this work. They're very pleasing to the eye and invigorating just to look at. You could totally make money by selling that pattern to some energy drink company to decorate the outside of their cans. I also think it's great that you balanced the whole work out by not making all the little orbs of light the same size. Some larger, some smaller....it's a great compostion! :D
Nice CC, and great artwork!
How could I not approve you? :3
Approved!
CtS~
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