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Seppy's Word Gallery Discussion

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Post by Guest Fri Jun 18, 2010 3:43 pm

Here you may comment on my word gallery

Here is the gallery (Clicky)

FINISHED WORKS
Part One of Seppy's Darkest Secret (Edited Version) (Extended Edition)
Part Two of Seppy's Darkest Secret

WORKS IN PROGRESS

Part Two of Seppy's Darkest Secret (Extended Edition)
Part Three of Seppy's Darkest Secret

REQUESTS?
These are requests I choose to undertake, they may be posted in this thread


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Post by Shadow Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:02 pm

You need to try and work on the grammar in your story. Things like properly abbreviated words and capitals for personal pronouns will make your story seem like more than a 5 minute job.
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