Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

by **Tim Hortans** Fri May 06, 2011 5:48 am

I just got a glorious idea.

Also, postan my mine and cial's inverted shops ideas so pere doesn't forget.

by **Darre** Fri May 06, 2011 8:34 am

Although Pere's storyline and dialog is the most complete, efficient, well paced, explorable, humorous, effective, informative, story opening, sensibly action packed and hilarious thing that we could hope for I don't want this to discourage writers from submitting ideas.

Good job Pere. We believed in you and you came through for us.

by Peregrine Fri May 06, 2011 5:12 pm

Oh thanks Darre.

But yeah like Darre said, anyone who wants to should still submit a script. Just random suggestions thrown at us are also welcome. I'm currently planning to incorporate Cial and Tim's ideas into the game somehow, although probably not for the tutorial since we're RUNNING OUT OF ROOM.

by **Cial** Fri May 06, 2011 6:18 pm

I think it would be funny to have Flaw say "Are you a BOY or a GIRL?" when you talk to him the first time, but that's just me.

by Mrsebi Fri May 06, 2011 10:54 pm

I considered that as well: but I decided to remove it:

SG1: So... are you a boy or a girl?
Player: What do I look like to you?!?
(If player is male)
SG1: Uhhhhh... girl?
(If player is female)
SG1: Uhhhhh... boy?
Player: ...

Also, I had a thing that in the gender selection, it would say:
Time to pick your gender, are you a boy or a girl? (If it takes too long to answer this, there may be something wrong with you)

by **Flaw of Insanity** Sat May 07, 2011 4:49 am

This is getting somewhere.

Personal opinion, Cial and Pere in charge of script.

"Are you a BOY, or a GIRL? Or maybe a CACTUS?"
>Select Cactus
"Game over, you turned into a cactus and can no longer save the world."

by Arch Fiend Sat May 07, 2011 4:58 am

no wait. its a trap!

by **Cial** Sat May 07, 2011 5:01 am

Flaw of Insanity wrote:This is getting somewhere.

Personal opinion, Cial and Pere in charge of script.

"Are you a BOY, or a GIRL? Or maybe a CACTUS?"
>Select Cactus
"Game over, you turned into a cactus and can no longer save the world."

>Select Girl
"Are you SUUUURE?"

by **Darre** Sat May 07, 2011 10:47 am

Are we all settled that Pere's dialog is that which should be used for the game and can now be moved onto the stage of intense scrutiny from the whole clan, in order to beat it into tiptop quality?

by Peregrine Sat May 07, 2011 6:03 pm

Well that was actually just a rough draft.

I would like to reserve dibs on being the first to beat it a little.

by **Darre** Sat May 07, 2011 9:02 pm

Beat away.

by **Tom Gaskarth** Sat May 07, 2011 9:04 pm

*Gets out the bat*

by Mrsebi Sat May 07, 2011 9:08 pm

Select Gender, if this takes long: there may be something wrong with you.
-Boy
-Girl
--------------------------------
(if boy, start game, if girl:)
Are you sure?
-Yes
-No
--------------------------------
(if no, return to first question, if yes:)
There are no girls on the internet! You cant be a girl!
-Fine, I was lying!
-I'm really a girl!
--------------------------------
(if fine, I was lying!, go back to first question, if I'm really a girl:)
Oooooh! Can I be ure BF plz?
-Sure?
-Just start the game...
--------------------------------
(if sure!:)
Skank! You would date text? *starts*
(if start the game:)
Prude... *starts*

by Crystal Lion Sat May 07, 2011 9:21 pm

What, are you trying to take the mickey out of any future players, Sebi?

by **Tom Gaskarth** Sat May 07, 2011 9:26 pm

He's just attention seeking Lion, ignore him.

by Mrsebi Sat May 07, 2011 10:00 pm

Shut up Tom, she didnt ask you.
And nah Lion, It was just a stupid idea I saw in a game ages ago, difference was that said game didnt actually have any gender selection, the end result of being a girl was that if you said you were, the game asked you out and refused to start, if you said no, it got mad at you and you would have to refresh to play again.
It was pretty stupid?
But yeah, not my original idea?

by Peregrine Sat May 07, 2011 10:10 pm

But you suggested we incorporate it.

by **Cial** Sat May 07, 2011 10:36 pm

I don't think it's a good idea. We could offend people.

by **Darre** Sat May 07, 2011 11:39 pm

Anything past the second screen could be seen as offensive but if only the first two were included the joke doesn't make sense. So I'd opt out for a normal gender selection screen.

by **Juliana** Sat May 07, 2011 11:54 pm

Flaw of Insanity wrote:"Are you a BOY, or a GIRL? Or maybe a CACTUS?"
>Select Cactus
"Game over, you turned into a cactus and can no longer save the world."

I like THIS joke. Let's use this as the only gender-selection-screen joke.

by Arch Fiend Sun May 08, 2011 5:34 am

ill show you cacti! and to ber honest. anything funny is offincive to the "politicly correct" the only way to have fun in life is to be tolerent of such things. the things ive seen so far are much more toned down then they could be compared to alot ive seen on tv these days so i believe if we wish to go for such comical gimmic then all ive seen are fine. anyway mosty of these jokes are way more child friendly then some posts ive seen befor here on tr.

by **Tom Gaskarth** Sun May 08, 2011 5:50 am

Arch Fiend wrote:ill show you cacti! and to ber honest. anything funny is offincive to the "politicly correct" the only way to have fun in life is to be tolerent of such things. the things ive seen so far are much more toned down then they could be compared to alot ive seen on tv these days so i believe if we wish to go for such comical gimmic then all ive seen are fine. anyway mosty of these jokes are way more child friendly then some posts ive seen befor here on tr.

TRanslated for Nuke:

Arch Fiend wrote:Being funny isn't politically correct. You have to laugh at things else you fail at life. This stuff is more toned down than what's on TV. I beleive that everything (Inc Sebi's Blatant sexism might I add.) Some of this stuff is more child friendly than some old TR stuff.

Personally I vote Sebi's bit out and Flaw's bit in.

by **Flaw of Insanity** Sun May 08, 2011 5:52 am

We're keeping offensive humor out of this. Random humor is fine. I knew that you would translate that Tom, thank you.

by **Tom Gaskarth** Sun May 08, 2011 5:58 am

You're welcome.

Can I be of help with quests and NPCs pl0x?

by **Darre** Sun May 08, 2011 6:33 am

Mission One - The Tutorial - Page 3 Trtg_i10

This is what I imagine when I read Pere's story but I can't for the life of me figure out if Tim's shops and the guards are around the perimeter of the moat, outside wall of the castle or inside wall of the castle surrounding the throne room.
What do you imagine?

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